The toughest obstacle authors face is their opening pages. In fiction and nonfiction drafts, there’s often a lot of throat-clearing in the opening sections.
In fiction, authors think readers need to know the main character in detail, so they dump a lot of that person’s history into the opening sections. In nonfiction, writers introduce the history of some event or person before getting on with the show. Both equal dull, slow pacing almost every time.
The trick is to weave that historic material into the opening section. The main focus should be on something that is important to the character, or in nonfiction, a specific part of the overall topic. As opportunities arise, slip in a few sentences or even a few paragraphs with relevant bits of backstory.
Special note in fiction: Avoid flashbacks! Use them only infrequently, and make sure to use them for all the right reasons. Too often it’s an easy way for authors to handle backstories. It is well worth the effort to weave the material in. The flow will be smoother, and agents and publishers know that’s a mark of a true professional author.
Monthly Archives: February 2015
Chicken Soup Seeking Submissions
Chicken Soup for the Soul is looking for true stories and poetry for three upcoming titles.
Dreams & Premonitions: stories about dreams and unconscious signs, and how they influenced your life.
Make Your Own Luck: stories that reveal how you’ve made your own luck.
Christmas: stories about Christmas including Chanukah and Kwanzaa.
Length: 1,200 words.
Line count for poetry: open.
Payment: $200 per story or $100 per devotional.
Deadlines for all three titles: March 31, 2014.
Submission guidelines here.
The Lack of Important Roles in Fiction for Women (and Blacks, and Gays, and Latinos, and…Name It, It’s Missing)
I was rivited by this post because it speaks to so much of the frustration I feel with MANY novels in MANY genres. So, although I haven’t read this particular book, I am thankful for this in-depth analysis and comments…especially those that offer simple solutions.
I’m an author an a heavy fiction reader. I love all kinds of books but am constantly disappointed by how few “good roles” are given to women. I give GREAT roles to women in my own novels. Not to make up for the broader lack but because they are strong women with strong minds and they want to make a difference in their worlds.
I’ve found that this “oops, I didn’t include any women” (or black, or lesbian, or other underrepresented group member) comment comes from authors who aren’t putting themselves in others’ minds.
Authors first and foremost must transfer themselves into other people. They have to expand their compassion and their intellect to see, feel, hear, taste and smell the world as some other. So when men don’t write women and white people don’t write Latino characters and straight authors ignore gay, lesbian, bisexual, transgender and questioning folks, they fail. They fail their stories and their readers. They fail our society, because nothing helps us reach across boundaries better than great fiction.
Book Review: This Glittering World by T. Greenwood
Really very well written. The storyline was a bit overdone in some ways (just too much like other books) but behind that plotline was a character who was fascinating. The main character here is not entirely a nice guy…and the author handles this exceptionally well. I really enjoyed this for reasons that were more about finding meaning and learning about humanity than the story. So…in a way not what I was expecting but it held my interest all they way through!
3 stars.
Job for Author at U of MA Press
The University of Massachusetts Press is looking for an experienced and creative Executive Editor to develop the Press’s current strengths in American Studies, particularly history, and to build new strengths in emerging related fields. The position is based at the Amherst campus.
The University of Massachusetts Press (www.umass.edu/umpress) has been the book-publishing arm of the University of Massachusetts since 1963. The Executive Editor will sign 20 new projects per year: monographs, general interest titles, texts, and digital projects, will engage with the scholarly community at UMass and nationally, and will attend conferences and review relevant literature.
The Executive Editor will work with the director in Amherst and the acquisitions editor in Boston to chart the Press’s editorial program.
Hiring Salary Range: $49,900 – $62,700
Normal Starting Salary: $49,900 – $56,300
The Position Description for the Executive Editor can be viewed in its entirety at https://www.umass.edu/umpress/about/job-openings.
Please go to http://umass.interviewexchange.com/jobofferdetails.jsp?JOBID=56554 and submit a résumé and a letter of application articulating your overall approach to acquisitions and the areas or fields upon which you would concentrate. The names, addresses, and telephone numbers of at least three professional references will be required prior to interviews. To receive priority consideration, please submit your application materials by the priority deadline of February 17, 2015. Applications will be accepted after the priority deadline until the position has been filled. Please include Search #R49293 on your application materials.
Book Review: 2666 by Roberto Bolano
I didn’t get very far with this work. Too meandering for my taste, and also meanders into arenas I’m just not interested in. So although I didn’t like it, it wasn’t for lack of writing skill or storytelling…just not my kind of book. So 3 stars because I feel like the fault is not in the book, and 2 stars would be too harsh.
Job for Author at Candlewick Press
Candlewick Press is a premier independent publisher of books for children based in Somerville, MA. It is searching for an experienced individual to direct their library marketing group to execute all library marketing efforts and oversee the library marketing staff.
Interested individuals should send their resumes with a cover letter noting salary requirements to: careers@candlewick.com.
Job for Author at Columbia Journalism Review
Columbia Journalism Review, one of the most respected magazines for journalists, is looking for writers. This is for their US Project, which monitors the quality of journalism. Details here.
Free Ebook: How Do Artists Survive?
Fantastic book for anyone involved in arts from writing to painting. Feel supported and understood with these wonderful words! Here’s the press release and the link:
“Making Your Life as an Artist,” a free ebook, takes a serious and at times mordantly
humorous look at the creative process of surviving and thriving as a professional artist
The arts in America are thriving. And American artists are astonishingly hard-working, driven,
and adaptable. So why are so many artists exhausted, overwhelmed, and broke?
In his new book Making Your Life as an Artist, Andrew Simonet – choreographer, writer
and, for 20 years, Co-Director of Headlong Dance Theater – offers answers to why anyone
would choose the life of an artist, and how to manage that life. He shares what artists already
know: building a life as an artist is a creative act, and using your artistic skills outside the
studio can make it sustainable.
The book is downloadable here. http://www.artistsu.org/making/
Job for Author at Ethical Travel
Ethical Travel (ET) newsletter is looking for a travel writer. They work internationally so you can work for them no matter where you live. Details here.
Book Review: An Arsonist’s Guide to Writers’ Homes in New England by Brock Clarke
I’m not sure why so many people gave this very low star rankings. I suppose it is a bit unique in terms of how it’s written; you do have to pay attention and stick with where the narrator goes to really enjoy the fullness of the nuances. But I found a lot of the lower ratings kind of harsh.
So, this was a very enjoyable read! Funny…not laugh out loud but amusing because the narrator’s observations about certain types of social norms and lifestyles is so spot on. Which makes his own inability to see what’s going on in his own life all the more ironic.
And, too, there is the complication that his parents lied to him about so much during his youth. He really had no choice but to become the loser he was as an adult. The story shows him peeling back those layers and taking responsibility for his own life…and even for that of his parents.
So, layered on much deeper levels than you’d think. The layers don’t all come clear until really the last handful of pages, so well worth sticking with it if you’re unsure whether to continue reading to the end.
4 stars!
Cool Job at Guinness World Records
Guinness World Records is looking for a publishing sales coordinator. All the usual requirements:
Liaise internally with teams in London/NY for sales materials and strategy, assist with management of book distribution in North America, internal reporting, manage digital publishing program; file processing, sales tracking, promotions, etc.
They are seeking an “enthusiastic personality with a passion for the Guinness World Records brand,” 2-3 years professional experience, prior experience in trade book publishing highly preferred. Fluency in Spanish preferred but not required.
Link here for details.
Book Cover Copy That Sells Books
The back cover should be more than a simple description of the book, and should include validation both from endorsements and through information about the author.
The description of the book’s content can be the most difficult part. It needs to do several things: outline the basic premise of the story, create an emotional response, and generate immediate recognition by touching on some universal issue.
While authors can try to write their own copy, usually they have trouble working all that into a single paragraph. They should either hand it to someone familiar with their specific category and market or at least get feedback from fellow writers.
When the description fails in any one of these areas, the back copy will fail to capture readers.
Once you have the description, work on blurbs. Testimonials are very effective. If you look at nearly any book, you’ll find that those with a slew of endorsements actually don’t run anything about the plot or the author on the back cover: it’s 100% testimonials. Authors who have only a few strong endorsements should mix those together with the bio and synopsis for best results.
Finally, validate your experience as an author by including a paragraph about you. Even if this is your first book, tell readers why you wrote this book and a little about your journey while writing it.
If you hit all three of these points, you’ll create copy that sells!
Job for Author at Avalon
Avalon is searching for a travel writer to write a book about a national park. Details here.
Job for Author at Nation’s Largest Lit Ctr
The Loft, the nation’s largest independent literary center, is looking for a new director. The Loft is celebrating it’s 40th year, and changes are coming. Be part of this dynamic and well-known organization. Details here.
